A collection of older poems

[Undead_Lives]

Since I posted my last poem and was met with great C & C, I decided to post some more.
Note: These are OLDER poems. I write better now.
Anyways, here they are. (all Untitled)
NOTE: Most of it is ramblings. So please, I don't want a hundred (ya, right lol) comments about "it doesn't make sense"


What will the new day bring
In the valley of the spring?
Of life, of living, of everything
Eternal.

Even if it all goes astray
There will alwas be a way
It will come to an end, some, today,
Death.

People complain about their disablility
To solve it, they believe in an entity.
Soon, they finally find, destiny
Awaits.

People will be kind and call you "bro"
But they have never sunk so low.
So, they will truly never know,
You.

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can you see the worlds fright, can you see the blight and look it's the
night
can you spread that fear, can you drop a single tear, can you hear?

darkness is in us all it's like a rolling ball it's bound to fall
and when it does you can say that you lasted another day that you weren't away

I'm all alone in here I can taste the fear in my hearts a spear
I've lost all my hope I don't think I'm on dope but I need to moap

I've been able to just sink, and have some drink, and be on the brink
don't know what is happening to me I still can see but I am not free

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can you see what I see, what I feel
can you see me where I sit and pretend
that it will all end and I can fit and deal.

can you find wat I find in others
can you find me when I'm lost and gone
cause I'm drawn to the cost of mothers.

can you live the way I live and still be alive
can you live without me and find the real me
where as I can see even though I'm blind and still strive.
(Did this one while experimenting with rhyming schemes)

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even a blind man can see,
and he's the only one who can set you free.
even a deaf man can hear,
and he will always keep it clear.

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So there you go, that's all I'm releasing, C&C is welcome.

 

[Escurial]

Im sorry... but i dont get any of those.

 

[Undead_Lives]

Your not supposed to....

NOTE: Most of it is ramblings. So please, I don't want a hundred (ya, right lol) comments about "it doesn't make sense"[/b]

Some of them were used just for their rhyming schemes. Others I did other little things with, like the first one.

 

[Moagrim]

I like the first one the best .Is it about religion?,coz thats what I interperated it as.

 

[Hunter_destruction]

What will the new day bring
In the valley of the spring?
Of life, of living, of everything
Eternal.

Even if it all goes astray
There will alwas be a way
It will come to an end, some, today,
Death.
People complain about their disablility
To solve it, they believe in an entity.
Soon, they finally find, destiny
Awaits.

People will be kind and call you "bro"
But they have never sunk so low.
So, they will truly never know,
You.
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Put all the bolded words together! They form a sentence!!

 

[Undead_Lives]

That's my little point.
I was hoping SOMEONE would get that
And I dunno if it's about religion per se, but religion definitely was an influence.