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My Story (Along the way project)
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<blockquote data-quote="Undead_Lives" data-source="post: 108311" data-attributes="member: 5928"><p>Flad doesnt read everything, just, when something catches his eye, he spams it like a maniac <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p>Good story, but really, type in Word. Helps a lot.</p><p>As for suggestions, I agree with Flad. You can't give any. It's too short, and all of this part was taken up by describing his condition. It's not enough for feedback.</p><p>Besides, I really hate people telling you what you should do next with your story. I believe it is the author's responsibility to decide that. Not the public.</p><p>Anyways, continue it please, it's not bad.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Undead_Lives, post: 108311, member: 5928"] Flad doesnt read everything, just, when something catches his eye, he spams it like a maniac :P Good story, but really, type in Word. Helps a lot. As for suggestions, I agree with Flad. You can't give any. It's too short, and all of this part was taken up by describing his condition. It's not enough for feedback. Besides, I really hate people telling you what you should do next with your story. I believe it is the author's responsibility to decide that. Not the public. Anyways, continue it please, it's not bad. [/QUOTE]
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