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Anything & Everything
Stories
The Eye of the storm.
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<blockquote data-quote="Kem Rixen" data-source="post: 107904" data-attributes="member: 5832"><p>I've been reading these but just haven't had the time to comment. I forget what happened in the first one so I'll comment on the second part. I was a bit confused with how the story went along, it seemed to jump around a bit, past, present, his thoughts. There is a bit of foreshadowing, the story being so short it can't really be taken advantage of however. I'll give it a proper rating later, these are what really jumped out at me.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Kem Rixen, post: 107904, member: 5832"] I've been reading these but just haven't had the time to comment. I forget what happened in the first one so I'll comment on the second part. I was a bit confused with how the story went along, it seemed to jump around a bit, past, present, his thoughts. There is a bit of foreshadowing, the story being so short it can't really be taken advantage of however. I'll give it a proper rating later, these are what really jumped out at me. [/QUOTE]
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