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The less-than-ordinary life of Kem Rixen
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<blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 107709" data-attributes="member: 5833"><p>A good story, though it was clear little- to nothing happened, it was enjoyable none the less. I do have a few comments to make.</p><p></p><p>You are using a lot of details. I personally like that a <em>lot</em>. But it will not be appreciated by just everyone. Therefore, if you don't enjoy writing those details, I suggest using less, since it will only be annoying for yourself if you write the amount without the motivation of writing it.</p><p>I, for one, enjoy writing details - but that is very clearly visible in my normal average post. I'm afraid I can't write in a different style than I do now. I tried it more than once, but I just can't.</p><p></p><p>His own name was never spoken. Though I can imagine why, I am a little saddend that it was never mentioned. Would this be rating, no penalty would be given since it is only a personal opinion. Despite being bad in remembering names, I enjoy knowing them since I am extremely interested in what names are given to the persons. A name like 'Oscar', will never appear in a story of mine, because I don't like the name - if they do appear, then the character is less- to not important at all.</p><p>Though a name was mentioned in the name of the thread, "Kem Rixen", it has never been confirmed if that is the person who is being accurately followed. For all I know, it could be one of his co-workers or the husband of the wife who thought him to be a criminal.</p><p>Despite I cannot remember who said it, "never assume anything." Though not necessarily a fitting quote in this case <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p></p><p>Regardless, it is a nice story, and I, for one, will be looking forward to more of it.</p><p></p><p></p><p>Doesn't ring a bell for me, sorry.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Fladian, post: 107709, member: 5833"] A good story, though it was clear little- to nothing happened, it was enjoyable none the less. I do have a few comments to make. You are using a lot of details. I personally like that a [i]lot[/i]. But it will not be appreciated by just everyone. Therefore, if you don't enjoy writing those details, I suggest using less, since it will only be annoying for yourself if you write the amount without the motivation of writing it. I, for one, enjoy writing details - but that is very clearly visible in my normal average post. I'm afraid I can't write in a different style than I do now. I tried it more than once, but I just can't. His own name was never spoken. Though I can imagine why, I am a little saddend that it was never mentioned. Would this be rating, no penalty would be given since it is only a personal opinion. Despite being bad in remembering names, I enjoy knowing them since I am extremely interested in what names are given to the persons. A name like 'Oscar', will never appear in a story of mine, because I don't like the name - if they do appear, then the character is less- to not important at all. Though a name was mentioned in the name of the thread, "Kem Rixen", it has never been confirmed if that is the person who is being accurately followed. For all I know, it could be one of his co-workers or the husband of the wife who thought him to be a criminal. Despite I cannot remember who said it, "never assume anything." Though not necessarily a fitting quote in this case :P Regardless, it is a nice story, and I, for one, will be looking forward to more of it. Doesn't ring a bell for me, sorry. [/QUOTE]
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The less-than-ordinary life of Kem Rixen
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