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<blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 119096" data-attributes="member: 5833"><p>Let's get first to the jailor/jailer part. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p>I'm pretty confused about it too, but I never really made an effort of trying to figure out what the right one would be. After all, besides this time, I rarely use the word. If I am in need of it, I have enough ways of avoiding it.</p><p></p><p>The story never really got completely finished, therefore the unsatisfying ending. </p><p>The "I broke out" could be taken in many different ways, which was my intention of letting the reader wonder about it when I wrote it that time. A few examples might be: "I broke out of this prison, which was described as unable to get out of earlier in the story" or "I broke out of something I was captured in <which is of importance>." Fill it in yourself if you feel like it. If you don't use the first example. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p><p></p><p>I've nevver written a storie without any "grammar mistakes" before, why wuld this be a exeption? U may point tehm out if u want, but it is a waste of time in me case, Hunter.</p><p>My thanks anyway.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Fladian, post: 119096, member: 5833"] Let's get first to the jailor/jailer part. :P I'm pretty confused about it too, but I never really made an effort of trying to figure out what the right one would be. After all, besides this time, I rarely use the word. If I am in need of it, I have enough ways of avoiding it. The story never really got completely finished, therefore the unsatisfying ending. The "I broke out" could be taken in many different ways, which was my intention of letting the reader wonder about it when I wrote it that time. A few examples might be: "I broke out of this prison, which was described as unable to get out of earlier in the story" or "I broke out of something I was captured in <which is of importance>." Fill it in yourself if you feel like it. If you don't use the first example. :P I've nevver written a storie without any "grammar mistakes" before, why wuld this be a exeption? U may point tehm out if u want, but it is a waste of time in me case, Hunter. My thanks anyway. [/QUOTE]
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