barred- print piece- work in progress

[psychonaut13]

been workin on some print pieces..

 

[psychonaut13]

bump...project updated. workin on the wires over the lips next...and then some butterflies on the left of the face

comments? crits? does it suck? does it rock?

 

[slick]

I think string would look better than wires.....nj btw

 

[Machiavelli]

Not exactly my bag there bunny, so I'm certainly don't have any sort of artistic commentary to add for you short of, I'm freaked

 

[DigitalSword]

...

thats some hawt shit bunny, id stick that in my myspace in a second.

the wires are still a little flakey along the enter/exit area's of the skin though(just a suggestion). search google for some stitches pictures for point of reference maybe you can lock it down that way?

looks great.

|DS|

 

[imported_SuXoR]

Nice job. A little freaky, yes but nicely done.

See no evil, speak no evil?

 

[blze]

its tight man, only thing is the corners of the eyes, the depth seems a lil
off for those middle bars. would they have to be longer/deeper to get down in
the corners? i like how the skin looks irritated a bit around the contact
points, w00t.

 

[stoned_MONKee]

Dammit Juggs it's been almost a month without any bunny love, so get re-installed. The print piece is cool, bu you're losing youe "edge" without CS :twisted:

 

[psychonaut13]

ok...updated 7:46 pm eastern standard time...

added "soreness" to the area's under the eye gate's contact with the face.

added highlighing and general push to the fencing on the lips. the reason theres not really a shadow on the lips from the wire is that the wire is pressing down on the lip..apparently i need to burn that a bit more and really make it pop.

altered drop shadow of eye gate over the eyeball itself to give more distance as the eyeball is "behind" the checkbone and such.

of course, MORE BUTTERFLIES! lol.

thanks for the input.
**will do a seperate posting of a second image for the next update**

"Dammit Juggs it's been almost a month without any bunny love, so get re-installed. The print piece is cool, bu you're losing youe "edge" without CS"

negative. the edge is here baby! RIGHT HERE! THE BUNNIES GOT THE LOVE FOR YOU! hawt chocolate bunny lovin!

 

[Intoxicated]

yea, i think the middle bars need to be longer, so they reach the corners of the eyes.....

nice job, even though it is rather freaky

 

[spliT]

looks pretty sweet

 

[Mank]

You got a lot of talent man. :lol: :lol:

 

[psychonaut13]

ok, i'm done with this one. but i like it alot, i hope you cats do too. thanks for the tips, pointers and misnomers.

if you want to see the big ass version of it...300 dpi...pm me and i'll link you.

 

[Intoxicated]

very nice.

 

[mYth]

It's definately worth a run in a art gallery........it has premise and a style that would catch the eye of the beholder.......nice shading too m8!