Perhaps, but the world it plays on, (which still doesn't have a proper name) has been my real 'masterpiece' as I detailed a lot of it out, though it isn't something I'll brag about. It took me a long time though.
I didn't like the switch at the start, but I adjusted to it halfway. I think the switch is a matter of taste, nothing else.
As for the cliff hangers, I tried to make them as good as possible, but in the end, it is a matter of taste as well.
Am I supposed to take this seriously? It is full with spelling and grammar mistakes - though nothing mind shocking.
Where it ended (at this moment) it was not planned. Not planned at all. Because I didn't have to go to work anymore and I couldn't find the necessary inspiration at home to continue the same excitement - though I tried - of the story, I stopped. Though the lack of interest in general was a large factor in it as well.
If I'd continue it, I'll have to read the story myself first. I can't remember clearly what happened exactly. But most importantly, I don't know the names of an amount of characters. Especially those who live in the 'main' house.
Thanks.
