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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Fladian" data-source="post: 118932" data-attributes="member: 5833">I often encounter problems when I introduce too many characters early on in the story. This is the first time I introduced five (main, or main supporting) characters so early on in the story and will keep working on it. If, and only if didn't really have that problem. Dale and Price (and Collins) were pre-made characters and were already completely planned out, therefore being a little flat. They're good characters nonetheless, but normally, I cut down on as little characters as possible early on in the story. I ignore too much character development otherwise.</blockquote>