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Anything & Everything
Stories
a love poem
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<blockquote data-quote="Falcoknight" data-source="post: 115906" data-attributes="member: 5850"><p>yeah its not very good, i didn't even read over it, though i impressed a i really liked so thats good <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></p><p></p><p>though i disagree with the rhyming post, not all poems need a rhyming sceam, mines more like the concept of a hiaku, its not meant for rhyming but its meant for feelings..</p><p></p><p>and "my lovely lady" is wrong i think, because, she isn't mine, infact the poem is about hopes, not about whats happening, unfortunatly it follows my hopes which wont happen lol <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite7" alt=":p" title="Stick Out Tongue :p" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":p" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Falcoknight, post: 115906, member: 5850"] yeah its not very good, i didn't even read over it, though i impressed a i really liked so thats good :D though i disagree with the rhyming post, not all poems need a rhyming sceam, mines more like the concept of a hiaku, its not meant for rhyming but its meant for feelings.. and "my lovely lady" is wrong i think, because, she isn't mine, infact the poem is about hopes, not about whats happening, unfortunatly it follows my hopes which wont happen lol :P [/QUOTE]
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Anything & Everything
Stories
a love poem
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