Undead_Lives
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I think we should do as that other forum did and have 10 teams of 1 person..
Maybe you should create a thread about it Flad.
Maybe you should create a thread about it Flad.
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10 teams of 1 person? If you meant one 'soldier', then it is impossible. There are multiple characters/soldiers in one team because they are the core. The personel fights between them, the friendship they develop and the injuries they could get play a large role.
I'll not be creating a thread about it this week. I'm going to focus on recovering from the flu completely first. Intensive thinking hurts, you see.
Oh, and on topic. I finished yet another part of rewriting If, and only if. It is going quite well. As a matter of fact, I made a few completely new paragraphs, which explain a few minor things.
I'll not be creating a thread about it this week. I'm going to focus on recovering from the flu completely first. Intensive thinking hurts, you see.
Oh, and on topic. I finished yet another part of rewriting If, and only if. It is going quite well. As a matter of fact, I made a few completely new paragraphs, which explain a few minor things.
Undead_Lives
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So your going to post the new revised "If and only If" in another topic later right?
Yes. But right now, I don't believe it is enough to fill a complete topic with.
For those who've read it before, I suggest reading it again as a lot of new details has been added to it, making it longer and perhaps more interesting. A lot of the additions are only minor and can easily be ignored, but at the point I am now, it is not really mentioning anything new. But the introduction of Dirk Bridge was quite... sudden. At the point where I am now, I've given a hint of Dirk Bridge existing, but not yet mentioning his role in the story. Now I only have to remember who Dirk was again, since I had a 'Bridge' brothers in the story. Names just aren't my strongest point.
Luckily, I am not confused anymore between Caitlin and Laura.
I am eager to continue to write If, and only if, though I find that the recovery of Lince has gone a bit too fast near the start of the story. Though it is true he collapsed more than once, the moment he stood up and walked to Claes and Alex went a bit too fast for my liking. I'm trying to find something to fix that, which may take a while... not that it gives any additional problem, since I have yet to post it.
For those who've read it before, I suggest reading it again as a lot of new details has been added to it, making it longer and perhaps more interesting. A lot of the additions are only minor and can easily be ignored, but at the point I am now, it is not really mentioning anything new. But the introduction of Dirk Bridge was quite... sudden. At the point where I am now, I've given a hint of Dirk Bridge existing, but not yet mentioning his role in the story. Now I only have to remember who Dirk was again, since I had a 'Bridge' brothers in the story. Names just aren't my strongest point.
Luckily, I am not confused anymore between Caitlin and Laura.
I am eager to continue to write If, and only if, though I find that the recovery of Lince has gone a bit too fast near the start of the story. Though it is true he collapsed more than once, the moment he stood up and walked to Claes and Alex went a bit too fast for my liking. I'm trying to find something to fix that, which may take a while... not that it gives any additional problem, since I have yet to post it.
Undead_Lives
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Haha, it should be pinned.
Although I will admit it is quite good, pinned topics are not for greatness, just for necessity.
Although I will admit it is quite good, pinned topics are not for greatness, just for necessity.
Undead_Lives
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When will you be finished? Any time soon? 
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