I know this thread is really old, but I'm just going to say this in case problems come up in future years.
This poem no longer applies to my book. Nethoros is simply a bad guy who betrayed his allies because he wanted more power, which they would not allow him to have. From now on, this poem is simply my way of expressing what I think it might be like for someone to be possessed.
Posting a new post to make something clear like that is in my opinion a lot better than editting the first post. Though it may fit in the first post as well, a new post was just... better.
Well, this is the Story forum after all... so, the first post is read quite often. But for those who already read it, they won't read the first post (anymore).
I still remain at my opinion that you did right, Tenebrae. =)
...and how would those that already read it know it then? When I don't feel like reading a story again, I won't just open a thread to see if it has been editted.
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